Sounds good to me. The drop could need a bit more variety in terms of melody and growls. Extending it with a 2nd part wouldn't hurt the song too. That could also be a good opportunity to make the 2nd part of the drop heavy or the 2nd drop entirely heavy to cover a wider listener-base. Because some people like melodic stuff, and others just want to headbang. Getting inspiration from Ray Volpe for this sounds like a good idea to me.
Hope that feedback kinda helps ^^'